Mr Bluck:
The time lapse sky shot is probably over-used, maybe use it just to signify time passing without returning to it.
At the beginning when the artist is in bed, he is asleep... do you have a shot of him lying with his eyes open? The track is called 'Insomnia' and he is fast asleep.
There is a bit of confusion when this cuts to the flashback as it isn't particularly clear that this is a dream? Is it a dream? Or is it a memory? If the denouement is that he can finally sleep after making amends then there needs to be a clearer visual definition between the present and the past.
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