Feedback:
Mrs Willcox:
- Second time lapse shot could be replaced with mugging flashback to make mugging more clear
- Generally good
- Female is confusing as we only see her briefly until late in music video
- Need to show Ben running to car as flashback can be confusing
- Looks brilliant
- Flashback within flashback might be confusing. Ensure colour is visually differentiated so audience can understand narrative
- Flashbacks need to be more obvious
- Some tap drips are out of sync
Nathan, Michael
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