Feedback on First Draft for Magazine Advertisement

Mr Bluck:

·         Font is boring

·         “Available on ITunes” doesn’t need to be on there twice

·         Looks more like a book cover

·         Needs a brand or model (Signature)

·         Keep the same style throughout album

·         Utilise top third of the screen more effectively

·         Use space better

·         Look at other electronica magazine adverts

·         Use the conventions of the genre

Michael